paulm_pic“Jay is an incredibly thoughtful and generous editor who brings a wealth of story and editing experience to any project that comes across his desk. His sense of character, plot, tone and style is impeccable. On top of all that, Jay’s charm and sense of humor make the manuscript-revising process a blast.” —

Paul Morrissey, Eisner Award-winning Writer and Editor

kim_photo06“Jay was brought on to serve my book clients as another set of eyes creatively and as a line editor. His skilled notes and insights set the author up for the extra development which can set their book apart in publishing. Jay is an asset to any author and has been a huge help to my clients.”

Kim O’Hara, Intuitive Book Coach, A Story Inside

IMG_6046“I’m not a writer, I’m an accountant. Jay did a wonderful job line-editing my memoir. He was able to make my words, sentences, and paragraphs read like a book! He also provided me with insightful comments on the book’s flow and content. I would highly recommend Jay.”

— Linda Horioka, Retired Big Four Partner

“I worked with Jay for several years while I was running an online entertainment news resource, and he was my copy editor. He was a consummate professional. I would work with him again in a heartbeat–and in fact, plan to!”

— Alexa Amin, Business Leader

web-7243“As a first-time author, I was nervous about writing my book. I asked Jay a ton of questions. He was patient, explaining everything in detail, and made sure I felt great about my book. I felt so happy and grateful that he was my editor. I would recommend him and will definitely use him again for future projects!”

— Jeremy Cortez, Entrepreneur

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“I hired Jay to do the final edit on my new book. He spent time with me to understand the intent and audience of the book and what I was hoping to achieve. He was very insightful, provided good feedback, and helpful suggestions. All around, he was a delight to work with.”

— Holly Richards, Founder, Gals Starting Over